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Sink or Swim

by Sarah Mlynowski · Whatever After #3

A fairy tale retelling that asks: should you change yourself for someone who won't accept you as you are?

Kid
57
Parent
55
Teacher
61
Best fit: ages 8-10 Still works: ages 7-12 Lexile 470L

The story

When siblings Abby and Jonah fall through their magic mirror into The Little Mermaid's world, they discover the original fairy tale is far darker than the Disney version. Their attempts to give the mermaid a happy ending keep failing, and they must navigate an underwater kingdom, a shallow prince, and a misunderstood sea witch before time runs out.

Age verdict

Best for ages 8-10, with the fairy tale humor and accessible reading level working well for younger readers and the self-worth themes adding depth for slightly older ones.

Our take

balanced

What stands out

Each audience's top 3 dimensions. Out of 30 scored per book.

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Kids love

  • First-chapter grab Strong

    Opens with Abby's genuine disappointment about a cancelled trip — instantly relatable for any kid — then pivots within three chapters to a magic mirror plunge that drops readers underwater without warning. The emotional hook lands before the fantasy hook, which means kids are invested in Abby before the adventure starts.

  • Middle momentum Strong

    Every chapter ends on a revelation or escalation: the mermaid's identity, the prince's rejection, the transformation, the rival princess. The failed-plan structure keeps kids reading because Abby's strategies keep going wrong in surprising ways, and each failure raises the stakes higher than the last.

👩

Parents love

  • Stereotype-breaker Strong

    The book quietly subverts fairy tale gender expectations: the prince is shallow and unredeemed rather than heroic, the girl protagonist drives the plot through strategy rather than beauty, and the central message — don't change yourself for someone who won't change for you — directly challenges traditional princess narratives.

  • Moral reasoning Strong

    The central moral question — should you change yourself for someone who won't accept you as you are — has genuine complexity for young readers. The sea witch's redemption through addressing loneliness rather than defeating evil models a sophisticated approach to conflict that parents can build conversations around.

🍎

Teachers love

  • Discussion fuel Strong

    Several genuinely debatable questions: Should Lana have changed herself for the prince? Was the prince wrong or just honest? Is the sea witch truly a villain if she's acting from loneliness? Should Abby have let the original story play out? Students can genuinely disagree on these without obvious right answers.

  • Empathy & self-awareness Strong

    Multiple characters require perspective-taking: Lana's willingness to sacrifice everything for love, the sea witch's loneliness driving her antagonism, the prince's inability to see past appearance. Students who engage with these perspectives develop understanding of how people make choices that seem wrong from the outside.

✓ Perfect for

  • readers who love fairy tale retellings with a fresh perspective
  • kids curious about the real versions of familiar stories
  • ages 8-10 looking for humor mixed with adventure
  • siblings who enjoy reading together

Not ideal for

Very sensitive readers may find water danger scenes and the concept of a character losing her voice unsettling, though both are handled age-appropriately.

At a glance

Pages
176
Chapters
22
Words
39k
Lexile
470L
Difficulty
Easy
POV
First Person
Illustration
Sparse
Published
2013

Mood & style

Tone: Adventurous Pacing: Steady Clip Weight: Moderate Tension: Emotional Stakes Humor: Situational Humor: Gentle Wit

You'll know it worked when…

Readers will know they're done when the siblings return through the mirror; the ending is satisfying and complete while leaving room for the next adventure.

If your kid loved "Sink or Swim"

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